This paper was the hardest for me yet. It was hard
for me to come up with even three pages. After getting professor Thomas’s help I
then went back and made my corrections and turned it into a six page paper. The
works cited was the easier part for me surprisingly. I follow step by step from
our bridging the difference book and
it really helped. I use MLA format throughout my paper and my title I think is
good. In my introduction is state the author, title, and topic. My thesis is
clear and easy to follow along with. I could have incorporated more research or
used more sources then I did. I think my summary of the song is perfect. It doesn’t
take much of the first paragraph but it still gets to the point and helps you
to understand the song at face value before I break it apart and analyze it. In
my paper I follow my thesis and support my claims with concrete evidence and
loads words to make them stronger. In my conclusion I restate my thoughts
throughout the paper and sum up what I just went over. I give new ideas and encourage
the reader to think further into it. I put a lot of time and work into this
essay and all in all this paper was rough to write but now that’s its over I’m
confident that it was an okay paper and I did my best.
I was in the same boat as you! I just could not get my paper to 3 pages. But I had Mrs. Thomas look over my paper and she made a few corrections here and there and steered me in the right direction. Sadly, I only got 4 pages but it's something! :) But, I bet your paper is really good. I would love to read it!!
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