Friday, April 26, 2013
Tuesday, April 23, 2013
self reflection - topic proposal
1.
This paper wasn’t too hard for me because I’ve
written the past three essays on this topic which made the research very easy. The
only problems I came across were procrastination because of other class work
and coming up with good transitions.
2.
In my opinion the best part of my paper was my
introduction. I gave a good interesting opening and I formulated my thesis
well. Throughout the intro I gave some details to hook the reader into the rest
of the paper.
3.
The weakest part of my paper was adding in the
research. I had a hard time balancing my opinion with the research. I had a lot
of good sources I could have incorporated more information from them.
4.
I believe I did pretty decent on my last two
papers considering the writer I was when I came into Mrs. Thomas’s comp 101
class last semester. I could have improved on incorporating my research and
making the transitions of my papers better. All around I could have made the
ethos of my paper stronger with the research and made the flow better with
better transitions.
Sunday, April 14, 2013
topic proposal rough draft
Kristen Ott
Professor: Thomas
Composition 102: rough
draft
15 April 2013
Doping
in Sports and Biological Passport
Can
you imagine being the athlete that gets second to Lance Armstrong in the Tour
De France then years later finding out he was cheating the entire time? Drug
testing needs to be more efficient so doping can be detected faster. In the
article “Are athletes doped? Some theoretical arguments and empirical
evidence." We read how typically we
look at athletes as clean competitors, however dating back to the 1960s, doping
cases have taken over the professional world of sports. (Dilger etal) The
number of doping cases has created an enormous problem in professional sports
today. Lance Armstrong is a prime example of the serious consequences that come
with cheating in such sports as bicycling. In order to stop or cut down on doping in
sports the United States anti-doping agency should introduce the biological
passport which would create an ongoing record for professional athletes to make
it easier to detect banned drugs.
Past
and Present
The
earliest records of doping in sport come from the Ancient Olympics games when
athletes are reported to have taken figs to improve their performance.
(Williams) As agencies grew more aware of the issue they decided to start
testing athletes and put a ban of drugs. In the early 19th century athletes
started experimenting with drugs to enhance strength and overcome fatigue.
(Holt) Since it was not yet illegal there was no telling the extent of what
these athletes would do to win. Now that there are rules set in place it makes
it harder on athletes, but not impossible yet, for them to cheat.
In Sports
Illustrated Magazine Michael Rosenberg reports “In 2004 there were 26
reported cases of doping in the summer Olympics alone.” While sports began to
grow larger so did the need to succeed. Time went on and athletes started
realizing that using certain performance enhancing drugs would increase their
chances of winning. More winning meant the more sponsors, endorsements, and of
course, fans. As I hear these excuses or lack thereof it doesn’t make sense to
me. Being an athlete myself I know that the pressure always fueled me. Just the
fact that these athletes went years lying is astonishing, winning would not be
the same knowing you cheated. Doping in sports has been around for many years
and is only getting worse. Urine sampling was supposed to be a test that would
no longer allow athletes to cheat.
Failure
to enforce testing
“I’m clean,
check the test.” For professional athletes to be able to compete they have to
go through testing to prove they aren’t using any performance enhancing drugs. This
test is to prove that it will be a good clean race. The test that is currently
being used is urine testing. This test breaks down particles in the urine in
search for anything suspicious such as banned drugs. In the article "Racing just to keep up:
anti-doping researchers are looking for new ways to catch cheaters. Can a
biological passport help to save the sport?" Callaway explains how
countless number of doping scandals shows that even with such test there is no
guarantee for a drug free race.
You
would think that urine sampling would be an efficient way of detection right?
Wrong. There are ways to avoid detection such as taking pills to wash your
system and even falsifying urine samples. (Callaway) Most of these athletes end
up finding way to avoid detection and get away with doping. For example, Lance
Armstrong was doping for over a decade before he was eventually caught.
(Rosenberg) Lance was stripped of all 7 of his Tour De France titles and had to
pay back all of his endorsement money. All of the races he cheated in, all of
the people he lied to, Lance would have never gotten away with it for so long
if the testing had been able to detect him the first time. Michael Rosenberg
said “Lance Armstrong would have been nobody without the help of doping.”
Should it even get to that point though? A more efficient test needs to be put
in place before the truthful athletes get second.
What
is the Biological Passport?
Somehow athletes have found a way to avoid being detected
through urine sample so this test is no longer bullet proof. Now the urine
sampling is proven to not be enough it is time to enforce a new type of
detection. Drug agencies have been recently talking about a biological
passport. The urine testing became unsuccessful because all it did was break
down the products in it for traces of drugs. Callaway says “The new idea of the biological
passport builds up a profile for each athlete over time to try and detect
biochemical changes that might indicate doping.” This new form of testing would
not just check for drugs at the moment but detect any change that appears
overtime also. This would narrow the chances of avoiding detection. Some
researchers say that the passport offers the best line of defense against
performance enhancing drug use, which has fooled inspectors for the past two
decades. Biological passports to detect steroid and growth-factor doping are
the upcoming solution that could end doping in sports. (Callaway)
Problem
solver
The Canadian government has renewed its 957,729
contribution to the World Anti-Doping Agency for 2012. (Kondro) These agencies
say they are committed to finding a solution for this issue and holding those
athletes responsible for their actions. All of the money put into the urine
testing could be used to enforce the new biological passport. In the "Athlete
Biological Passport - World Anti-Doping Agency,” the WADA explains how the fundamental
principle of the Athlete Biological Passport is based on the monitoring of
selected biological parameters over time that will indirectly reveal the
effects of doping rather than attempting to detect the doping substance itself.
The agencies are working on making the detections stronger by making it
possible to detect even the smallest amount of drugs. The fight against doping
relies on several strategies, including the direct testing of athletes as well
as evidence gathered in the context of non-analytical doping violations. By
combining these strategies, and seeking new ones to address emerging threats,
the global fight against doping is more effective.(WADA) They plan on implementing
this new form of testing for all athletes in not just cycling but every
professional sport.
Some
say it will cost too much to enforce this new type of testing so there would be
no point. In reality by implementing the biological passport these agencies
will save money in the end. The critics are overlooking the amount of money the
agencies pay for every doping scandal investigation. It would be worth spending
the extra money to implement the more efficient testing so they could save
money with a fewer number of doping cases. Lance Armstrong is an American
professional cyclist who has a net worth of $125 million. In the article
"Lance Armstrong Net Worth," Brian Warner says Lance makes roughly 15
million dollars a year from speaking engagements, public appearance fees and
sponsorships alone. With professional athletes making this much in one year
they should be able to pay for testing themselves to prove they are clean. No
matter what way you look at it the biological passport would cost less money
than the urine sampling along with all the doping scandals.
At
the end of the race
Is
it okay for your children to cheat in “Duck, Duck, Goose” or lie to get ahead
in a game of tag? It’s hard to teach
children not to do these things while their favorite sports player is doing
just that. In the article titles “Lance Armstrong Doping Confession: In Any
Sport, Drugs Are Drugs." It brings up the possibility that these younger
athletes may think it is okay to dope if they don’t believe that talent and
determination is no longer sufficient enough. Implementing the biological
passport would enable the anti-doping agencies to detect the cheating before it
even gets to the public.
No
matter how you look at it, doping is a form of cheating. Urine sampling is no
longer efficient enough to stop doping. This idea for the biological passport
sounds to be the most recent, more efficient way to put an end to cheating in
professional sports.
Works
Citied
"Athlete
Biological Passport - World Anti-Doping Agency." World Anti-Doping Agency. WADA, 20 Nov. 2012. Web. 14 Apr. 2013.
Callaway, Ewen. "Racing just to keep up: anti-doping
researchers are looking for new ways to catch cheaters. Can a biological
passport help to save the sport?" Nature
475.7356 (2011): 283+. Academic OneFile.
Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
Dilger, Alexander, Bernd Frick, and Frank Tolsdorf.
"Are athletes doped? Some theoretical arguments and empirical
evidence." Contemporary Economic Policy 25.4 (2007): 604+. Academic
OneFile. Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
Holt, RI. "Result Filters." National Center
for Biotechnology Information. U.S. National Library of Medicine, 19 Aug.
2009. Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
Kondro, Wayne. "Anti-doping allocation." CMAJ:
Canadian Medical Association Journal 15 May 2012: E414. Academic OneFile.
Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
"Lance Armstrong Doping Confession: In Any Sport,
Drugs Are Drugs." Monitors Editorial Board. The Christian Science Monitor. The
Christian Science Monitor, 17 Jan. 2013. Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
Rosenberg, Michael. "Here's the Truth: Without
Doping Lance Armstrong Would Be Nobody." SI.com. Sports Illustrated, 18 Jan. 2012. Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
Warner,
Brian. "Lance Armstrong Net Worth." RSS. Celebrity Net Worth, 22 Oct. 2012. Web. 14 Apr. 2013.
Monday, April 8, 2013
working thesis and outline for paper 4
Working thesis:
In
order to stop or cut down on doping in sports the United States anti-doping
agency should introduce the biological passport which would create an ongoing
record for professional athletes to make it easier to detect banned drugs.
Outline:
Doping in sports and the biological passport
-story
of the past (examples)
-connecting
it to athletes everywhere
Failed attempts
-what
are past test
-why
they are not as good
-How
athletes get avoid getting caught -thesis
Biological passport?
-introduce
the idea (what it entails)
-why it
is the best possibility
-statistics
Problem solver
-how
they plan to implement this new form of testing
-how it
would benefit in the long run
Conclusion:
-why a
new way is needed
-how it
effects not just the athletes but everyone
-how fans can help
Friday, April 5, 2013
Prospectus for Essay 4- doping in sports
he issue I am writing about is Lance Armstrong and doping in
sports. This issue is only getting worse and it needs to be tended to. Athletes
in every sport are either getting away with it or being caught using banned
drugs after years of cheating. These athletes are finding ways around the urine
test such as taking pills to flush your system or falsifying the urine. A new solution
needs to be enforced so the cheating stops. The people who could put an end to
doping are the drug agencies. This is my audience because they have the power
to make the change and do something about it.
The solution
that I am proposing is the Biological passport. This is a stronger way of
detection. This to me is the best possible way because it monitors over time. The
passport builds up a profile for each athlete over time to try and detect
biochemical changes that might indicate doping. Biological passports to detect
steroid and growth-factor doping are the upcoming solution that could end
doping in sports. Biological passports are better than urine testing because it
is, if not impossible, harder to fool. It is not just a onetime urine test; it
monitors your body over time so if the slightest change happens they suspect
something. This will decrease the number of athletes that get away with doping.
I will build rhetorical appeal by creating ethos with my sources. Logos will be
created by my statistics and numbers. Athletes that were truthful but ended up
getting second to someone who used performance enhancing drugs could also evoke
emotion in the reader. Talking about how children everywhere look at to these athletes
that have been cheating will create pathos. I have been writing about this
issue since paper two so I am excited to talk about a solution.
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