Tuesday, April 23, 2013

self reflection - topic proposal


1.       This paper wasn’t too hard for me because I’ve written the past three essays on this topic which made the research very easy. The only problems I came across were procrastination because of other class work and coming up with good transitions.

2.       In my opinion the best part of my paper was my introduction. I gave a good interesting opening and I formulated my thesis well. Throughout the intro I gave some details to hook the reader into the rest of the paper.

3.       The weakest part of my paper was adding in the research. I had a hard time balancing my opinion with the research. I had a lot of good sources I could have incorporated more information from them.

4.       I believe I did pretty decent on my last two papers considering the writer I was when I came into Mrs. Thomas’s comp 101 class last semester. I could have improved on incorporating my research and making the transitions of my papers better. All around I could have made the ethos of my paper stronger with the research and made the flow better with better transitions.

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