Monday, April 8, 2013

working thesis and outline for paper 4



Working thesis:

                In order to stop or cut down on doping in sports the United States anti-doping agency should introduce the biological passport which would create an ongoing record for professional athletes to make it easier to detect banned drugs.

Outline:

Doping in sports and the biological passport

                -story of the past (examples)

                -connecting it to athletes everywhere

Failed attempts

                -what are past test

                -why they are not as good

                -How athletes get avoid getting caught -thesis

Biological passport?

                -introduce the idea (what it entails)

                -why it is the best possibility

                -statistics

Problem solver

                -how they plan to implement this new form of testing

                -how it would benefit in the long run

Conclusion:

                -why a new way is needed

                -how it effects not just the athletes but everyone

-how fans can help

 

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