OUTLINE:
introduction- summary of the commerical and thesis
pathos- devices that contribute to it
ethos- sarahs background and devices
logos- devices that add to it
how this benifits the argument and makes people more willing to help
conclusion
how this benifits the argument and makes people more willing to help
conclusion
Hi Kristen,
ReplyDeleteYou have a good start! Try to combine the two sentences in your working thesis to make a more sophisticated statement. I love the specificity you have, but you need to explain exactly what the argument is. In your outline, think about the order of rhetorical appeal. Would it be more effective to discuss elements of pathos last, since those are usually the most powerful and plentiful? Thanks!